https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_804737
A sequel set 16 years later looks like the MC of the previous series may have passed away.

isnt this series a serialized one?i get that the different continuty and all but image reading a romcom and seeing a sequel where the main character died young and another yong guy is fucking your two daughter and your wife probably too xd

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まさか、前作の主人公が死んでしまったの？
一体何が起こっているのか、誰か説明してくれませんか？

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前作男主死了？
新男主這集吃了姐妹丼，下集要吃母女丼？

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Japanese authors really love coming up with shitty ideas that ruin their own stories lol… Readers seemed to enjoy both the SFW and NSFW versions of this series, so why make a “sequel” set 16 years later where the MC is dead and some other young guy takes his place as the man of the family?

What would it cost him to just write a new story with new characters?

At this point, you even have to be wary of safe works, because Japanese authors have a high risk of coming up with some shitty idea.. what’s wrong with them ??

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i dunno but this is so out of nowhere and strange that,unlike other similar mess, i find this legitimately funny,like if the sfw serie was cancelled i could see the author going scorched earth ntr,but the whole 16 years time skip and the mc dying relatively young is so strange xd

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It’s not outright stated, but yes, there’s very strong indication that Kouichi has passed away, there are some hints in a few of the dialogue exchanges and the last page might be a dead giveaway, there’s a butsudan shrine at the back when Hana masturbates longing for Kouichi’s name, we don’t see the who is in the picture frame but that is one of the more modest versions of a home shrine for the deceased in Japan.

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Anway, the story starts with Hana happily saying she is having another baby, Kanon is going to be a big sister, whoa, Kouichi says he will have to work harder now (Hint 1); 16 years later we are introduced to the new protagonist Yuji, he is a college student taking a breather on the countryside, at the bus stop he meets a high school girl, that’s Kanon all grown up, they have a small talk and something immediately clicks with Kanon, she feels a burning desire to be with this stranger, Kanon randomly gets sexual with him because she recalls her mother’s Hana advice, when you see a special person that makes your heart flutter like never before then just give yourself to him, that’s your fated person, it’s better to have kids while young, Hana was so happy she took that path (Hint 2).

Afterwards Kanon feels embarrassed for servicing a man without knowing his name first, thus Yuji introduces himself, he and Kanon are formally acquainted, henceforth Kanon wants all of Yuji, she will finally will become like her mother, reminiscing of how her parents Kouichi and Hana had sex near her without care, a very sexually liberated couple who doesn’t seen anything wrong with making love near the children apparently, it is a proof of their love. Then we cut to a gyaru surfing, that’s Nina, Kouichi and Hana’s second daughter, Hana says it is time to eat, playtime is over, Nana doesn’t to want to get out of her board but Hana insists, Nina won’t make her mom mad.

At home Hana and Nina see that Kanon brought a guest, and stumble on Kanon leading Yuji by the dick after their love making, Hana and Nana see Kanon is already fucking? Hana is a little distraught, but her gut feeling saw this coming one day, Kanon innocently tells her little sister and mom that she thought it was appropriate to shelter the guest, she felt a zing with him! Yuji is apologetic but he tries to make things right, thanking them for their hospitality, Hana gives the ok while Nina is little skeptic still, why should they shelter a guy? Hana ponders why too, but she feels this may be the right thing to do.

Yuji and Kanon keep their lovey dovey activities, Nina has grown more used to Yuji’s presence so her curiosity about sex seems to be taking over, she may be not so different from Kanon after all… and while looking at how hard Hana is toiling at the soil by herself without any other male presence Yuji offers some help (Hint 3), Hana tries excuse him, he is a guest, Yuji can’t be doing things like that but Yuji insists so Hana allows him to wash the veggies at least, Hana gives one peculiar look at Yuji’s crotch…

Afterwards Nina takes Yuji to teach him how to surf, no more barriers between them Nina wants some of Yuji’s big dick too, they go at it, Nina loves it but Kanon drops by and catches them, she is jealous, Kanon wants Yuji’s babies, she is serious about this while thinking Nina is just being curious about sex but they get Yuji to share them, coming into an understanding, in the end a lonely Hana is seen masturbating, likely hearing her daughters having the time of their lives with a man, in tears Hana calls Kouichi’s name, while the scene frames a certain altar in the background, THE END.
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Pretty wild to make this decision to seemly kill Kouichi off and very strongly hint Hana will move on with another man, her daughters’ boyfriend, if this gets a sequel, It definitely ended in a sequel hook manner. I wonder if Kaduchi will make the main draw of the alternate universe serialized version in the future the fact Kouichi won’t die young?

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最后一页的灵位已经暗示，前作男主过劳死了。RIP

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Are JP artists having a weird obsesion with NTR lately or is it just my imagination?

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Did you guys forget the heroine was used goods?, and the mc literally raped her in their first meeting.
The story starts by telling us she fucked a classmate and he was bad

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This series is going off the rails. Great artwork, shitty continuity.

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@kotorin

That's besides the point after this doujin version is on its 6th Part by now, it created a generally cozy nature between Kouichi and Hana since, people have been reading this story about a couple in the countryside building a family and being happy, now suddenly a 16 years time skip happens out of nowhere and the previous protagonist is likely dead, now a new dude comes in, having Kouichi's daughters is one thing, but Yuji also having Hana later can rub some the wrong way.

What will readers of the mainstream serialization think now? Kouichi dying in that version will be a real worry from now on, Kouichi doesn't rape Hana when they meet in this version, if that's your issue with him. I do wonder what Kaduchi / Takeuchi Kazuma was thinking with this development.

Then again just before this release Kaduchi made the odd chapter where Hana somehow has a delusion where she goes to the beach with Kouichi and baby Kanon, but somehow she meets Kouichi when he was a kid and has sex with shota Kouichi, a weird imagination scenario. Kaduchi might just be doing whatever crazy thing that pops in his head right now with the doujin verse, while keeping things safer in the serial manga verse.

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Is scorching your own prior works for some bizarre sequel situation a new fad going among creators in the H-community or something?

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Now that everyone, including me, has given their opinions about this bizarre development, I will now huff some copium and play devil's advocate just for fun.

What if Kaduchi's is just trolling? There's several hints about Kouichi's passing all over this book BUT it never outright confirms it.

- Kanon and Nina are pretty happy for supposed half-orphaned teens, they talk about their father twice, never in a past sense, Kanon about how she saw their parents having sex, and Nina comically about how Yuji's dick is as big as Kouichi, prompting the former to wonder why his daughter know her dad's dick length. Have Kanon and Nina simply gotten over the fact their dad passed away?
- Hana would be the one feeling that loss the most, she does make those comments advising her daughters to build a family while young like she did, she seems pretty alone working on the fields, and that stare at Yuji's crotch is pretty suspicious; however, Hana was established as a pretty slutty gyaru with plenty of experience before she met Kouichi, what if a simple long absence has made Hana feel that needy?
- The strongest hint at the end, the butsudan shrine framed at the back as Hana masturbates in tears calling for Kouichi's name, that seems like a complete giveaway, however, Kaduchi doesn't show the picture frame, that would have been a simple thing to do, show Kouichi's photo on it and there would be the confirmation that he is truly gone, and yet, Kaduchi opted not to show it. Thus, someone in Hans's family has died, only that is certain.

I will leave this here until Kaduchi says something in a post somewhere or a sequel to this doujin is made, ultimately confirming or debunking the matter at hand.

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@Goukenimaru

(About your 2nd post): Imo the SFW and NSFW versions of a work should complement each other. One should show the slice-of-life side, for instance, while the other explores the more intimate side sex and so on. Or, if they differ, they shouldn’t be complete opposites.
Something like Imaizumin Brings All the Gals to His House, which is imo a good example of this.

(Your 3rd post): The trolling about Kouichi possibly being dead is also plausible. Maybe you’re right, or maybe Kaduchi is deliberately leaving things ambiguous so he can see how people react and decide what to do next based on the feedback. Perhaps he feels like he’s explored everything he wanted to with Hana and Kouichi in the NSFW version and wants to continue with their daughters and some random guy. I mean, that’s fine, but leaving Kouichi’s death ambiguous and having some random guy replace him in his own household… Like I said earlier, that’s a shitty idea, and unfortunately, Japanese authors don’t exactly have a great track record when it comes to ruining their own work lol

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黃漫還是不適合搞第二代,前任男主兩個女兒就這樣便宜二代男主,連老婆都大概率送人

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I think Koichi is just fat away because of a job.

I'll believe this until sequel happens because I don't believe Kaduchi could be this stupid

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